Monday, May 3, 2010

55 fiction

55 fiction is a contemporary form of fiction in which the author must limit himself or herself to 55 words. Here's my first attempt. Do tell me what you think!

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I opened my eyes blearily.
Bright light, noise, movements, screaming...Where was I?
Where had I come from?
Colours and shapes, jumbled up…
Shoved and pushed, I wanted to return to the warm, comfortable darkness. Oh, what was my crime?


And then I heard a voice,


"Get up sleepyhead. It's time for school"



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10 comments:

Vivarjitha said...

ok..its just AWESOME..haha nice one!!!

Charu said...

@Vivarjitha: It's our story, right?
:D

Thousif Raza said...

swt, simple, funny, awesomeness, it has all :) great.... loved it :)

take care and keep writing........

Charu said...

@Thousif: Thanks :)

Vivarjitha said...

seriously YES !!!!

nil said...

Nice!!

nil said...

very very nice attempt! :)

Charu said...

@Nil: Thanks! I'll try to do another one soon, when inspiration strikes... ;)

Vintage Obsession said...

haha :) nice one hon:)

Charu said...

@Vintage Obsession: Thanks!