55 fiction

55 fiction is a contemporary form of fiction in which the author must limit himself or herself to 55 words. Here's my first attempt. Do tell me what you think!

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I opened my eyes blearily.

Bright light, noise, movements, screaming...Where was I?

Where had I come from?

Colours and shapes, jumbled up…

Shoved and pushed, I wanted to return to the warm, comfortable darkness. Oh, what was my crime?

And then I heard a voice,

"Get up sleepyhead. It's time for school"

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