tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6266119475382409460.post1580763237241363274..comments2023-03-16T18:11:35.377+05:30Comments on A traveller's fruits: A poem - Dying and living everydayCharuhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/07881189322165051018noreply@blogger.comBlogger8125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6266119475382409460.post-32119201300185534442011-10-09T12:48:04.799+05:302011-10-09T12:48:04.799+05:30@Kalyan: Hello! Thank you so much, I'm glad yo...@Kalyan: Hello! Thank you so much, I'm glad you liked it :) Hope to see you often!Charuhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07881189322165051018noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6266119475382409460.post-31281891001009992782011-10-09T12:27:31.392+05:302011-10-09T12:27:31.392+05:30lovely lines...nicely crafted words!lovely lines...nicely crafted words!Kalyanhttp://icetrail.blogspot.com/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6266119475382409460.post-21639915745350508292011-09-24T13:35:09.217+05:302011-09-24T13:35:09.217+05:30@Arpitha: Awww, I feel honoured *blush* I'm so...@Arpitha: Awww, I feel honoured *blush* I'm so glad I can write poems that resonate with you so much. Thanks so much and I'm very glad you like the poem :)Charuhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07881189322165051018noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6266119475382409460.post-17084723640358632612011-09-23T10:55:24.120+05:302011-09-23T10:55:24.120+05:30i hav never been able to express my feelings in wo...i hav never been able to express my feelings in words.. its kinda hard for me most of the times.. <br />reading ur poems makes me feel tht now i've got words to those feeling i'v not been able to pen down.. :) :)<br />beautiful poem.. :)A Fineapplehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02048348049529752146noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6266119475382409460.post-19917081580784138842011-09-20T08:34:30.686+05:302011-09-20T08:34:30.686+05:30@Saru Singhal: You're quite right. The poem di...@Saru Singhal: You're quite right. The poem did reflect my state of mind and thoughts at the time. I'm really glad you like the poem*especially the beginning) and thanks ever so much for your lovely comment :)<br /><br /><br />@Prabhavati: Hello! Thanks for your appreciation :)<br /><br /><br />@Nil: Thanks *big, big smile* And it's wonderful see you on my blog again :) And you're right. We're still only realising what our dreams really are. And we go deeper into ourselves to find them. Exciting, right?<br /><br /><br />@Nil: yay!Charuhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07881189322165051018noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6266119475382409460.post-62457982327766755882011-09-19T20:31:46.561+05:302011-09-19T20:31:46.561+05:30Also, LOVE the new look of the blog :)Also, LOVE the new look of the blog :)nilhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12055067396258349246noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6266119475382409460.post-70239893742946453362011-09-19T20:29:54.389+05:302011-09-19T20:29:54.389+05:30And you've done it again, Charu.
The lines-
&...And you've done it again, Charu.<br />The lines- <br />"Teaching my heart to forget its dreams<br />As if they have already been realized." made me smile, for it stands so true. We are so young, so erratic. We are only stepping on brittle stones to realize what our dreams really are!<br /><br />And the last few lines-<br />"It is difficult to reach my heart<br />When it is buried under the layers<br />The world says it needs." -- Damn,lady! What lines. Beautiful I say. Bravo. <br />Looks like I've missed out on a lot. But not to worry, I'm back! :)nilhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12055067396258349246noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6266119475382409460.post-70363983359052614932011-09-18T07:14:41.246+05:302011-09-18T07:14:41.246+05:30I think the poem reflects your state of mind. I li...I think the poem reflects your state of mind. I like the beginning of the poem as the feelings are worded very nicely. In the end, your understanding of life in general is reflected. Anyone can relate to this poem. Unadulterated emotions are hard to find these days! Great poem CharuSaru Singhalhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12860642404643756746noreply@blogger.com